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It was fantastic the good description in your writing made me feel like I was there standing right next to him. You put in good similes so I know what he looks like and how he moves. Try to use more powerful vocabulary but other than that tiny error it was very good.
— Flamingo
mexico I love your description you put every bit of the iron man in it I could imagine exactly what he looked like although i'm a bit confused on the whole friend bit. Teddy loved it to.
— Mr bean