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Your writing was very good. The questions you asked made me want to read on. I felt like he was standing next to me. There was very good description. I could tell that you put a lot of effort into it. You could work on not saying tree so much and some metaphors such as; Skyscraper mountain but other than that it was brilliant. Keep up the good work I can't wait to see your next piece of writing.
— Cool Cobra & Flamingo
MALTA I thought the combinations of words you used were good because you didn't repeat any of them but you introduced the giant to quick. You could use a different word than tall all the time like humongous or a simile like as tall as a mounting.
— MuhammadAli
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