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Hey! What up Madagascar. It's UNICORN & Neanderthal just to saying there is nothing wrong so keep up the good work. IT WAS AWSOME. By the way its Unicorn writing because I am cool.[DAB]
— Unicorn & Neandathul
Hi Madagascar I am Captain Barnacles and I really enjoyed reading your story but I think to make it better you could of put a comma after the word 'big' on your first line. Although I loved your use of onomatopoeia and you had some great vocabulary. Great story, Captain Barnacles
— Captain Barcnales