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Hi it's pug and snowshoo and we loved your story adjective's and your nouns.I wish that you could add a bit more simmelies.
— PUG!! & SNOWSHOO!!!!
Very good piece of work. I liked the bit where you were just minding your business and then bam it was right there. You included your feelings which helped me know what kind of a person you were
— flamingo & cool cobra
Your only downfall was your punctuation
— flamingo & cool cobra
Japan I like the whole idea about your story but their are some spelling and punctuation errors and it doesn't really flow well. But i like story-line.
— eminem
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