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HELLO... ... I am confused about the size of the head compered to the size of the feet BUT I I think u need to put a difernt word for big down like gargantuan
— chihuahua and puma
hi I am confused about the 25 foot tall part so can you make that more clear ok byeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
— amilie
Hi Italy, I like the tension of the first paragraph. Your imagination would make a brill MINECRAFT map. I didn't like the bit where his head "was as big as a flower pot" and maybe make your piece a little bit longer. But over all a really cool bit of writing. Don't forget to subscribe and join TeamTDM for daily MINECRAFT videos. Dan
— DanTDM
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