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I like your intro and your similes but maybe add less similes next time and when we read your second paragraph it did not make sense as it jumps around too much without being clear what you are describing.
— cat and snow leopard
i like your one because it has good description good job
— chihuahua and puma
Iceland I really love your description on the metal giant (its really good) but maybe you could work on CL FS since I can see an error in this sentence; against the floor .but his fire eyes blinded. Ps. Say hi to the polar bears.
— Adele