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I love your Iron man description and your similes
— cat and snow leopard
Dear Hungary, I found your use of comers was brilliant; you used them at the right time in the right place also I like the way you include the fact you've read the book into your writing. I found your style of writing really suited this piece. Although I know you were probably told too write a small amount of writing maybe next time write a bit more. From Peppa Pig (The Pig) P.S. If your hungry have some food.
— Peppa Pig (The Pig)