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Dear Germany, We liked your description, we got a good picture of him, it made sense but there are a few spelling mistakes. From Labrador and Camen. :)
— Labrador & Camen
I really like this piece of writing but I have got something you could improve on. not to use the word when to many times at the start of the sentence apart from that I think it was amazing I really liked the description. from Jennifer Hudson
— Jennifer Hudson