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Dear France, We really enjoyed it, it made sense, but you got a bit of punctuation wrong... :') From Labrador and Camen. :)
— Labrador & Camen
To France, I really liked your description on the Iron Man, particularly the description of it's eye's and it's size. Although it was good, I think you can I'm prove a bit by adding in a few more commas and by making it a bit longer. But other than that, it's great! From your 'Duff Hero,' Homer Simpson. P.S (Duff Rules!)
— Homer Simpson