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Dear Denmark, We loved your writing about Iron Man. In particular we liked the way you said ' prove I'm not scary in capitals to emphasise it. We also liked the way it starts as it grabs my attention and makes me want to read more but building suspense.
— Lion & Elephant
Dear Denmark, I am the Queen. I really liked your story about the iron man. My favourite part was when you were describing him, I could picture him very clearly in my head. - I don't know if you were allowed to do speech or not, but in my opinion I would say that sometimes It sounded a bit strange. -Another thing is that sometimes I thought you could have used some commas. Here are some positives about it: It was very, -Descriptive and -Well controlled Yours Sincerely, The Queen
— Queen Elizabeth The II