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Dear Canada, I thought your Iron Man description was very imaginative and I loved the fact that you told me why you were in the woods. It was great how you told me how you spotted the Giant/Iron Man. I would just say watch out for your spellings and punctuation. If you can master those two little things you are well on your way to being a great writer. Meow, meow, meow Yours sincerely Jaguar and Turtle
— turtle and jaguar
To Canada I really enjoyed your first paragraph, your use of vocabulary was very good. I don't know whether it is a publishing error but there was no punctuation in the document, therefore I found it very hard to understand. (If the punctuation was in) I really enjoyed your piece, keep writing! Dan Reynolds, Imagine Dragons
— Dan Reynolds
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