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it was a very good description and it exited me a lot t: you need better vocabulary you had a good slimily
— husky , lizard
to Canada I really loved all of your description and really helped me to imagine what the Iron Man really looked liked. Thing I think you could work on is on the first line it begins with AS if a sentence begins with AS you need to use a comma instead of a full stop at the end of it . from Bastille
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