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the story was very entertaining and amazing t: you should have written iron man & giant the same amount you could see a picture of iron man in your mind you used good vocabulary for your age well done from husky and lizard
— husky lizerd
To Australia, G'day mate! It's your old pal, Donald Trump! Please note that I am only writing this for publicity purposes. (This sort of thing gives me popularity points). I must warn you that my computer puts #votetrump everywhere, so that's why. Ok ok ok. You wrote this? A random 8 or 9-year-old named Australia? It's so good! BAM BOOM KABAM! The way you made me picture a big Iron Man in my head was really good. You used a lot of short sentences which is a good skill so keep doing it! Well done. #votetrump As amazing as it is, there are a few mistakes. #votetrump. And being Donald Trump, who never makes any mistakes, I know a mistake when I see one. > Tense. This is a tough thing to get right, so keep working at it. > You should try not to say 'he' then 'it'. Keep it the same so it will improve your writing (not that you aren't already good). > BOOM BAM KABAM OR WHATEVER IT IS. You do not need to expand the font so much. It looks a little - weird, but good onomatopoeias. > I KNOW short sentences are good, but maybe some longer ones would be good. #votetrump > I'm being fussy now, but maybe some commas would be good? Thank you for writing this for me; it was a fantastic description! And don't forget to #votetrump! Kind Regards, Donald Trump P.S Let's build a wall!!!!!!!!!!! #BuildIt #Mexico'sWall #VoteDonald Tweet me at @DonaldTrump WAM
— Donald Trump