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Hey Argentina, I never expected how amazing your work is. I think you could be a fantastic author sometime. You really got me stuck in like I was there and I enjoyed your descripted writing. your a brilliant writer I hope you write more. * Fabulous Description * Amazing similes The first sentence needs breaking up into two sentences or you need a connective.. Also, saying 'only as big as a search light' does not make sense. Do you mean they are big or do you mean they are small compared to the size of his head?
— Ferret + Duck bill platerpus
Wow - this is brilliant. I would give it a, Ten from Len!' Are you sure you're not a teacher?
— Len Goodman